smudgepainter

I'm going to post my first three efforts at painting portraits. Although I enjoy a pat on the back as much as anyone, I am really seeking as much constructive criticism and guidance as I can get in my efforts to improve this new (to me) technique. I only learned of this within the last few weeks and am working hard to refine my style. My goal is for a classic, oil painted feel.

Thanks in advance for your thoughtful replies and your assistance in my learning process. I sincerely appreciate it.

Well, I am far from being an expert so I will say only what I see. I like this one but I would like to see the sharpening halos (if that's what they are) on the cheek and where the leg meets the wood of the chair arm, lessened. I think I would also like to see it a little lighter on the upper thighs of this little guy. With that said, I think you did a nice job with this one. The hair (which is a thorn in my own side) looks really good. The overall mood of the image has accomplished what you have set out to do. You do some very nice work.

You are so right on the sharpening on this one. I tried a harder Unsharp Mask on this prior to painting on him and it resulted in some distracting artifacts, especially when proofed at a 30x40 size (just the face). I'll do him again when I learn a few more tricks about file prep prior to painting. I'm in Scott Deardorff's class right now (just started yesterday) and am also seeking as much other input as I can get. So thanks! And I see your point on his thighs. I'll make sure not to drag any dark into lighter areas on his legs when redoing this one.

Again, great catches, and thank you so much for your feedback. I welcome you to comment on any of my work anytime.

Hi there,
I really love your work. You've got the old masters style down perfectly. Since you asked for input, here's a couple of thing that jump out at me (besides the fact that I love it):
The halo on the L cheek (facing the painting) that I think someone else mentioned, and I would tone down the highlight on the dresser embellishment by the back of his head. It kind of looks like some stray hairs poking out since they are the same color. His hair looks great by the way.
Outstanding work!!