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Second Cocker

Postby jo vollstedt on Mon Jul 07, 2008 9:36 pm

Here is the second of three Cockers I'm doing. Any suggestions appreciated! Thanks for looking, Jo

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Postby Angela on Tue Jul 08, 2008 2:17 am

wonderful Jo.. sorry no suggestions here.. apart from maybe just a bit of a contrast boost... but that might just be my monitor also.. either way, love it.
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Postby palms on Tue Jul 08, 2008 2:27 am

Lovely work again Jo and great subjects, I also think a slight tweek to the contrast/saturation

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Postby mikajomc on Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:08 am

Great job Jo!
Did you use the same Painter-PS workflow as the other?
I think Angela & Palms are right, a contrast tweak might be even better.

Also, great background. :wink:
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Postby Ronnie on Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:50 am

Jo, very nice smudge.
I think the catch lights in the eye could stand out a bit more, they look faded and not standing out.

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Postby jo vollstedt on Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:20 am

Thanks for the honest opinions, I appreciate it very much. I will apply more contrast/saturation, brighten the catch lights and do a re-post.

Jordan, I did use the same workflow as the other Cocker. I'm doing three dogs as separate portraits and the owner wants to try them combined as one, so I need to keep the same technique going on all three. Thanks for noticing the background, I couldn't have done it without you! :wink:
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Postby jo vollstedt on Tue Jul 08, 2008 9:18 am

Ok, here's the revision! Saturation boost, contrast boost, catch light enhancement, a little Paint with Light action, and a paper texture added. Jo

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Postby mikajomc on Tue Jul 08, 2008 10:00 am

Excellent!!
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Postby Ronnie on Tue Jul 08, 2008 10:49 am

Excellent Jo, Looks much better.

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Postby palms on Tue Jul 08, 2008 11:02 am

That's done it Jo

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Postby jo vollstedt on Tue Jul 08, 2008 12:07 pm

Thanks again for the input, I think this one is ready for print! Jo
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Postby Angela on Tue Jul 08, 2008 4:08 pm

perfect :)
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Beautiful Jo

Postby RayGuselli on Thu Jul 17, 2008 12:08 am

looks superb to me....this smudging is so addictive....but time consuming!!

best wishes

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